Rachel’s Application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by fqrgetful, Jan 7, 2018.

  1. fqrgetful

    fqrgetful New Member

    IGN: fqrgetful
    Age: 14

    Have you read the rules agree to follow them [yes]
    Alt [y]
    Rules I like the most I haven’t really found a likening on rules except hacking rules I hate hackers

    [Rp] i take a counter attack on jump over him and struck him from behind he falls to the group in pain I take his dagger away and decide to flee’




    [Rp] i glare at the precious item it’s worth much then i can bargain for. I think all different things if I should steal it or make the money. I start to think nervously if I work for it it could be gone and I would of worked for nothing ooh well at least I won’t get locked up for god knows how long.
     
    Last edited: Jan 9, 2018
  2. Flashera

    Flashera That Admin Guy Staff Member Showrunner

    Your application seems to have been cut off somehow. Please fix this and reply to this thread when you have.
     
  3. fqrgetful

    fqrgetful New Member

    Crap I wrote way more then that rip
     
  4. Flashera

    Flashera That Admin Guy Staff Member Showrunner

    You forgot multiple sections of the application and did not apply grammar. Please fix this.